New War (for You)
I know this one is strange, so work with me, and read it carefully. It's very mixed up and I'm not sure if you will get exactly what I was trying to say, but oh well.
New War (for You)
Darkening me
insidious rage,
intelligent anger
a new War I’ll wage…
on the pain,
the hate
and my suffering
You can’t relate…
to my mind,
the hidden
the masks
I have forbidden…
My feelings
to show,
new friendships
won’t grow…
with the anger,
the rage,
I’ve locked
on this page…
I’ll end
the rain
and worsen
my pain…
To keep
Your sanity
I’ll lose
my vanity…
Yet I will
always
Choose You
New War (for You)
Darkening me
insidious rage,
intelligent anger
a new War I’ll wage…
on the pain,
the hate
and my suffering
You can’t relate…
to my mind,
the hidden
the masks
I have forbidden…
My feelings
to show,
new friendships
won’t grow…
with the anger,
the rage,
I’ve locked
on this page…
I’ll end
the rain
and worsen
my pain…
To keep
Your sanity
I’ll lose
my vanity…
Yet I will
always
Choose You



3 Comments:
Post a CommentWhen you say "For you", who is the "you"?
By LouLaughlin, at 1/19/2006 9:17 PM
Do you ever "respond" to your comments?
By LouLaughlin, at 1/23/2006 8:17 AM
Not ususally, but if you want me to, here is my response...
You didn't read it well enough, and the you is irrelivent
(I hope I spelled that right...)
By Joshua, at 1/23/2006 4:13 PM