Fear

I know it's kinda shaky on the entrance, but stick with it, I think that this has some potential. There are some good thoughts in this one, that I did not notice as I was writing it. I'll play with the first few lines to get them into the rhythm. Tell me what you think so far and give me your thoughts on how to fix it, please?


Fear

Alone from the fear
of another's thoughts,
fleeing so they
can't connect the dots.
Thinking differently,
no time to bound:
time is endless
when no clock is wound.
Life isn't shrt
when there's no time.
I'll bet it'd be longer,
if you lived as a mime.
So I sit all Alone
with my Thoughts in my head,
No one can hear them:
they only eat when they're Fed